Bad Water 2

I'm not sure what I did here. It's a colossal mess. I was using a lot of thinner since its the first sketch and I had to get it and the palette out of the house before everyone suffocated. Its such a simple composition, and like all the others, its already finished (in my head). I worked out the steps, how long could it possibly take? Four, maybe five weeks? We'll revisit this post in six months.